Score: 10

"This is..."

submission: Metropolis Schmirkit

date: January 6, 2009

Innovation... I mean, this flash is pretty much art... I like how the flash expresses the oppression of the evil chain smoker by having the man on the roller blades ride down the lane with a great deal of stress and then having the chain smoker mock his efforts. It just really emphasises the point that chain smokers are diabolical pricks. I love it.

10/10

Score: 10

"Full of awesome"

submission: Awesome Compilation Vol 1

date: July 20, 2007

Awesome. And your voice makes me hot...

Score: 6

"Not too bad for a start Mark."

submission: Karsu Revenge ep1

date: November 7, 2005

Ya, its me Sean. Of course, its not totally awesome since it is your first...but for a first, its not too bad.

I didn't have sound at the moment because my comp is a piece of shizzle so i'll just base it off what i saw

- It seemed rather random... I don't know why, but it did.
- Graphics weren't the best... but ok for a start
- The story...I don't know....i wasn't really paying any attention to it
- Masking needs a bit of a fix....
- Needs to be more dynamic...like...instead of just smoke and houses crumbling, you need like...houses being burned and exploding or something...oooh ya
- Needs to look a little 3D... the houses just looked to...plain...a little dimension to it would've been better.

And thats about all the advice i can give you.... its not too bad for a start Mark, so just keep practicing flash and your movies will be bad ass in no time :)