Not too bad for a start Mark.
Ya, its me Sean. Of course, its not totally awesome since it is your first...but for a first, its not too bad.
I didn't have sound at the moment because my comp is a piece of shizzle so i'll just base it off what i saw
- It seemed rather random... I don't know why, but it did.
- Graphics weren't the best... but ok for a start
- The story...I don't know....i wasn't really paying any attention to it
- Masking needs a bit of a fix....
- Needs to be more dynamic...like...instead of just smoke and houses crumbling, you need like...houses being burned and exploding or something...oooh ya
- Needs to look a little 3D... the houses just looked to...plain...a little dimension to it would've been better.
And thats about all the advice i can give you.... its not too bad for a start Mark, so just keep practicing flash and your movies will be bad ass in no time :)